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Brian Lyke  
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 More options May 10, 5:25 pm
From: Brian Lyke <brian.l...@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 10 May 2008 13:25:14 -0800
Local: Sat, May 10 2008 5:25 pm
Subject: Acting / Directing notes

Here's some things I wrote down in my iPhone while I watched. Hope  
they help.

Acting Directing final notes

  peer gynt Sam
Accent really worked. Script was 2nd to action. Actually blocking  
worked. Except for some upstaging in the middle.

Julie
Great opening. Good blocking. Great characters. Was not sure why  
ramiro was actracted to miss julie. Conviction or attachment to  
characters not seen 100%. I think it was just line trouble. More  
volume. Again, why does child julie attract man ramiro. Not enough  
evolution in Julie. Happy ending.

J.D.
Great intonations for diff chars. Give me more. I would have liked to  
see more energy. Give me both characters All out to audience. Theology  
funtime. Religious angst is hard to sell. One person three chars has  
to have a clever hook. Otherwise, why did you weaken scene with you.

Peer gynt.
Great dorothy. Accent, acting all there. Sam great energy, you sure  
told an epic story. I lost some words though. Out more Sam. I want to  
see your face.

Quake 1

Quake 3
Success. Last fuck you a little off. Notepad under utilized.

Gaslight
Gooood. Circle blocking irked me once. Hard to critique.

Kosovo
Great costumes. The doll did not tell a clear enough story though.

/Brian


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