Here's some things I wrote down in my iPhone while I watched. Hope
they help.
Acting Directing final notes
peer gynt Sam
Accent really worked. Script was 2nd to action. Actually blocking
worked. Except for some upstaging in the middle.
Julie
Great opening. Good blocking. Great characters. Was not sure why
ramiro was actracted to miss julie. Conviction or attachment to
characters not seen 100%. I think it was just line trouble. More
volume. Again, why does child julie attract man ramiro. Not enough
evolution in Julie. Happy ending.
J.D.
Great intonations for diff chars. Give me more. I would have liked to
see more energy. Give me both characters All out to audience. Theology
funtime. Religious angst is hard to sell. One person three chars has
to have a clever hook. Otherwise, why did you weaken scene with you.
Peer gynt.
Great dorothy. Accent, acting all there. Sam great energy, you sure
told an epic story. I lost some words though. Out more Sam. I want to
see your face.
Quake 1
Quake 3
Success. Last fuck you a little off. Notepad under utilized.
Gaslight
Gooood. Circle blocking irked me once. Hard to critique.
Kosovo
Great costumes. The doll did not tell a clear enough story though.
/Brian